Good camera
Your cinematography was great and you have a good understanding of where things should be and what pace the movie should go at. The only problem was, as you mentioned, the artistry and characters which didn't work so well.
This must have taken a while, so well done.
To improve
I would add a pause button, scene selection, and correct your spelling and grammatical errors.
I've played most of the Zelda games, but couldn't understand who the majority of the characters were. Explanations/intros would be awesome.
Nothing personal, but I quite despise the whole 'Well I've been holding back my true power' thing. New attacks with silly names aren't half as interesting as combatants who use tactics to find an advantage.
Uhhh...ok?
Not sure who the heck the dude with the beard was but I stopped watching it after the DBZ style fighting started (Teleporting/flurry of attacks). I'm sure your a better artist now but you didn't do yourself any favors submittng this one.