I was going to give you 0 stars on this review, but I figured your imagination in the Author Comments deserved half a star. The music sure didn't. I really couldn't find any heads or tails in it, to be honest. It was like 3 random tracks shuffled together like 3 different decks of cards - no good outcome will ever come from that. Ever.
About why I find the Author Comments imaginative: It's funny that you can be neighbours with both Deadmau5 and Basshunter, seeing how Deadmau5 lives in Canada, and Basshunter lives in Sweden. Oh, and Tiesto is from the Netherlands. Besides, you're not going on Itunes with this "music".
Keep practicing. No one is great at first, but if you keep practicing, practicing, practicing - you may get good.