Hmm
The story was okay, but the animation was really poor. I was quite suprised, when I saw, he had a wife and kid, because he looked like he was 14.
You did some nice animated moves during the soccer game. Why not the whole movie?
Reviews for "Space tumor"
Whao, depressing, yet hopeful
Your mouse drawn scenes from the 3d perspective are really nice, reminds me of CCC animations. You ought to try and make a whole flash with nothing but mouse drawn. The side animations were a little blocky.
3/5, solid story, but dodgy animation.
Okay
It's not more than okay, i agree with Catobleppa on what he says, though i do not belive it deserves a 0, it was a good concept wich has potential, the sound was horrible, and the animation was not good at all, it's the concept that saves it, and the anti-cynical message; that one should keep on fighting no matter what.
Okay...
I know a lot of people are giving this positive reviews, so I gotta be the bad guy here.
1) Why did the tumor have to be the result of a meteor? Any condition leaving someone with not much time to live would be good enough, even just a normal tumor.
2) If you were going to use the meteor aspect at least make it relevant, it wasn't mentioned beyond him seeing it.
3) Why would he just leave the hospital? His family would have been called to see him
4) He didn't want to see his family but he wanted to play soccer? Why would I feel sorry for that guy?
I see what you were going for, but you could have done much better in terms of consistent and believable writing.
Not great
Just a silly story, not perfect animation and not touching too, cause I knew the end from the very beginning. Not surprising, but hey, you still put an effort in this. Go on, empress us next time.