Cute
Yeah, I guess it's pretty obvious this was just a test for the art and animation style, and you did a great job! Everything was done smoothly and realistically (as pertaining to the art style) and it was kind of cool to see something new. The only point off was because it could have been a bit longer or had more depth.
loltastic
awesome
Short and sweet. I like it.
Wow!
One of the best flash submissions I've seen on the portal in a long time. In terms of concept you nailed it. I love silent movies and the graininess of the "film" was nothing short of perfect. Please, please keep your word and make more of these
heh nice
I know some people, possibly including you the author, will question why I gave this a fulll ten, which is something I rarely do, but I have a soft spot for old fashioned style animation and film, and this really just hit that spot. Drawings and animation were nice. Good cute old fashioned character design, but still has a somewhat modernised feel to him, the do not push the button sign should have been in mor emodern text though, there was also a point where some text was on the screen, but passed to quickly to be read, I don;t know if this was intentional on your part or not but it actually had a good effect, because it reminded me of the nature of relly old cartoons which often had certain flaws or bugs that kind of gave them character in a way. Also, Nice work on the overall special effects for the film, the scrath lines along the film and the genereal fuzz looked good, and the music was well chosen, looking forward to seeing more cool animations from you.
PS. In your author's comments you say you will make more of these, how soon might they be released?
either way, PM me when you do.
Thank you for the kind words! All your points are very relevant, but quite a lot of the flaws are definitely intentional. There's also the fact that this looks more like it's set in the 50s and I'm not an expert of films from that era, but I know enough to know that silent films were long passed by then.
I'm hoping to produce many more of these, so I'll keep you updated!
Thanks again.
Billy Bob Thortonious
I think you pulled it off very well, and this would be a great idea for a short series to come out with. Well done Matthew McElfresh.
Thank you! I do believe I'm going to continue this as a series so keep your eyes peeled.