dude....
first off, don't make the blood splatter in the sky, it looks like it's a wall, next I think you need to add swearing it says shit in the song, at the begning..... and finally put some aniation to the charicters!!!!!!!!
dude....
first off, don't make the blood splatter in the sky, it looks like it's a wall, next I think you need to add swearing it says shit in the song, at the begning..... and finally put some aniation to the charicters!!!!!!!!