Decent.
I loled pretty hard at this. Mostly 'cause of the shock factor involved with the bird hitting the building. It was unexpected, and birds hitting objects is funny anyway.
Nice work.
Reviews for "Black Hawk Down"
A Roman Kersplatski film!
I loved watching him spiral down to the ground! :D
lol
the end was very funney.
You're right
That really is pretty strange, I wasn't sure what to expect when following the bird, and knocking down an entire building was pretty funny. What made this most hilarious was the random guy in pain, yelling about his wiener. Pretty good, my suggestion would be to compile a bunch of strange ideas and make a story or collab out of them, because that was funny but short! Nice job.
Kyaztro responds:
That's not a half bad idea
whaaaaaat?
um... i little random, but.... yeah... sure... pretty funny. at least you didn't just stop at the bird smacking into the building. there has got to be a million flashes where you just see something die because it's stupid. an interesting twist on a very cliche idea. i especially liked the guy whining about his wiener :3