Grah, the Story was fine. But...
It needs Audio, and better movement, not just people teleporting from one place to another.
Reviews for "Mario's Adventure."
Better than the first one i must admit!
I don't care about the graphics but the reason i didn't give you a 10 is because you need to add sound, i like the storyline and the way things work out! So i gave you a 4/5!
Narrative
Sound, voices? Do you think anybody is supposed to have fun watching stopmotion? Write a book, if you think so.
Kaytee responds:
Awww thanks for the great review :3
ok heres the thing
sotry is jhust fine, so some of th ebackgrounds, you need sound effects BADLY, try to fix the blockly movement, it CAN go somewhere, so fix it yup, make wiht audio, not choppy, um maybe get rid of the MS paint blood thing and try better in that, theres my review please do heed my advice
Kaytee responds:
Thanks for the feedback.
Pretty much the same that the first one.
Your movie is much the same exept it's easier to read. There is no animation in your sprites and no sound and song hurt your movie as well. I like the story. Feel you lucky if this movie passes the jugements.
Kaytee responds:
Why the serious review?