Potential but needs some changes
Okay, the animation is good and the voice acting however I must say it wasn't all that funny.
The humor comes off as trying to make the game blatantly racist. The game gets enough grief over in my opinion the stupidest aspect of the game; which is the race of the enemies due to the location of the game (I don't want to get into this because i feel it has little to do with your sketch) . However, your promoting something about a game that isn't true and giving the game a bad rep. Now i understand you are right to have your own opinion on the game...and this sketch does have potential to be halarious if you altered a few things
my ideas
- have the people saying stuff like "want a beer"
- "let me eat your face" and turn into the parasite
-"need a rench"
- leave out the part with them all looking alike...didn't come off as funny
-or change it to her being surrounded by them and "i couldn't see you in the pile you all blended together
(i dont' expect you to use my ideas i know i have a difference sense of humor than others..but they are my ideas in how i would chance)
Now i will admit i am a fan of the game so i am probably more annoyed that someone would want to focus on this "negative" point of view people have on this game (negative depending on if u agree the game is being racist i don't considering location and game history) .I will give you credit for trying and i know the public capital punishment was kinda funny...but the rest wasn't...so i give you a 5/5 for potental
I doubt my opinion will be of use to you however...just something i felt like sharing, and sorry if i come off argumentative or anything of the sort.