I predict that...
this song will be very popular on Newgrounds.
Personally, I think it's cheese.
It's well produced however, nothing is out of place and the overall structure is very commendable, although nothing new.
It's just so formulaic though, you can imagine it as the preset trance song for a new synthesizer or something, which is not want you want if you want more respect than just from the simple- minded pre-teens on Newgrounds.
However, if thats your target market, then awesome work dude!
Good luck in the future Dimrain.