Great story period
I was shocked that the story was this good! Keep up the good work. You will get better with the animation as time goes by. I know that you know how to tell a story though. Great timing! THE PUPPY ROOM!!!
Reviews for "paradise missing draft"
Much potential
This is a very solid cartoon, not gonna lie. Keep at it for when it comes out it will be very sweet. But things you need to work on
- Fix up the drawings and make them look more detailed and better.
- Animation ( Lip Sync and Frame By Frame - spend more time on those, read up on it. )
Good luck, this has so much potential I would love to see it at its best!
9/10
5/5
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illustrations 2 / 10
Animation 4 / 10
Humour 3 / 10
Sorry, this just doesn't do it for me.
brilliant idea
great idea for a series,
work on your flash skills and it could be top rating stuff
ill support you 100 percent
use a little more detail on the scenery
and work on a little louder audio
besides that props
brilliant
I am eager to see the next one... It is quite remarkable that this flash is very entertaining, though the animation and drawings could be a lot better (okay, I know- it's a real pain in the ass to make a movie of that length with fluid and varied animations.)