Honestly...
I didn't find it too entertaining. Nothing too exciting to watch for me.
However, the animation was superb and the audio didn't at all seem contrived.
I can see where you wanted to give up, I assume it was due to you feeling like the story was going no where.(however I may be wrong...just a guess)
That all said, you said you learned a lot about animation though this project and I look forward to what you'll make next. You certainly have the talent! My hope is simply that you make sure to focus on an entertaining story.
Comments rarely have constructive criticism these days and I hope this helps.