2 Listens
verse 1 - Round #, name, mathophile, too many people do follow the hi-hat, light weight.
verse 2 - Hypetrack flip flip, showing up in a hearse, mathophile flip, castration, homework.
verse 3 - Oh okay trying this time, wreckin like tekken, alarm clock, you're definitely a dick we'll call you flaccid (one of the best lines I've heard so far this tourney).
verse 4 - Distilled filler, density, on topic and timing, smoking and getting over specific.
Vote goes to flippoint.
Yo Flip, no disrespect, but if you have to explain in detail every line of your track just so people can understand your disses, then you weren't very effective.
Also, even if they were all "personals", you could have still said most of that stuff in a battle with anybody. If they were personals, they were the vaguest personals I've ever heard.
This was still a good battle though, but my vote goes to Byron. His disses were not vague, and the listener could tell exactly what he was referring to for the most part. Plus, I noticed how you picked that slow beat in hopes to mess him up stylistically, but him going off on it like he did was almost like a flip in itself.
Like I said, this was a good battle, and props go to both of you. But Flip- when you have to explain your bars in sooooo much detail like that then you aren't doing it right.
Sorry for the second account but it seems like there's a little confusion about what I have been saying. This could not have been written for "any emcee", I am talking about his flow and style with multiple metaphors.
Both my verses were written in under an hour with no pre thought lines.
As for homie down there askin about the tissue lyrics. I called him weak. He can only viscously rip apart tissue.
"looks like I got a speak and spell" - Metaphor. He rhymes like a robot, or a machine.
When I said eliminate existence, he flipped by saying "your gunna elimate existance, that means your killin yourself right " This made no sense whatsoever.
I clearly stated "face the collision of my hammer, elimate existence, OF THIS KID, 2nd place skid, admit..." - I have no idea what you were talking about. It makes no logical sense.
"you probably get a hard on when studying statistics" - You sound like a nerd is what I was saying.
"man the high hat, it seems to me you ride that just like ecliptic, but your shine lack, with contact, to all tracks" - You ride the high hat and strictly the high hat. Like the ecliptic, which is the path of the sun. But you have no shine on every track.
", take a deep breath and send you, on your way, with the breeze like leafs cause you light weight" - called him weak
"you rhyme dry with less flavour then skin flakes" - No style.
"open up your hype track talkin bout that hard shit, this unalarmin, like bombs threats lackin carnage." - Claims he would do violent horrible things. Lying fake, with no substance.
"you rockin style ah hellen kella
deaf and blind, specifically I said you lackin vanilla
wtih the rhyme" - no flavour or style, and you weren't listening to my metaphors.
" robotically neorutic. "He rides the high hat and only the high hat.
define: Neurosis. A relatively mild mental illness that is not caused by organic disease, involving symptoms of stress..." - Sounds inhuman, like a robot.
"attemptin to sound demonic" - Gory rhymes. no need for that fake bullshit bring the creativity.
"if you had a gun a cocked it itd be empty"- sayin' he's no threat
" claim I'm dead, well the reaper sent me" - flip
"and claimed I'm not a detective" - he said I didn't do my homework. Detectives do homework, research, study...??? You guys gotta listen closer to these verses.
"im soundin the alarm because you slept in, it clear,
that you veered of the path and crashed from taken naps" - He wasn't listening to my rhymes.
"if theres birth control for flow youve taken the contraceptive" - He has no flow, plus I called him a bitch.
"you lack creative tactics, to grab attention ah factions
you definetly a dick so, we'll call you flaccid" - No creativity with the flow or delivery. He tries to sound like a "killer" and in doing this I say he's a dick, plus, he's soft.
"no one deserves a slow death, you the one that's wack" - You called me wack, so I called you wack. Who the fuck says that "slow painful death" bullshit. Get outta here, bring something creative.
I am talking about his particular style the entire time. The last emcee that rhymed on this track -- http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/476978 --- in the preround had massive amounts of flow. I could not say any of this shit to a guy like that.
I dissed your entire style for 32 bars with metaphors.
I don't know what else you guys want.
hey yo looks like I got a speak and spell for my competition
face the collision of my hammer, elimate existance
of this kid, 2nd place skid, admit, you probably get a hard on when studying statistics
get with it, you gravel pit it, Im flowin liek pacfic, to get specific,
talkin to girls for you's apocalyptic
man the high hat, it seems to me you ride that just like ecyptic,
but your shine lack, with contact, to all tracks
imma give it, what I have to, so let me step back, take a deep breath and send you,
on your way, with the breeze like leafs cause you light weight,
you rhyme dry with less flavour then skin flakes
open up your hype track talkin bout that hard shit
this unalarmin, like bombs threats lackin carnage
claimin you visously rip apart mcees, but theres issue
this emcee you see aint a tissue
you rockin style ah hellen kella
deaf and blind, specifically I said you lackin vanilla
wtih the rhyme,
robotically neorutic, attemptin to sound demonic,
a procduct, of lackin knowledge, if you had a gun and cocked it,
itd be empty, claim I'm dead, well the reaper sent me
you try'd to be effective, with no hip hop presective
and claimed I'm not a dectivite,so im wreckin like its tekken 7
if theres birth control for flow youve taken the contraceptives
im soundin the alarm because you slept in, it clear,9
that you veered of the path and crashed from taken naps,
better start to open ears when I come to rap facts
I said elimate you kid, ya failed class
you lack creative tactics, to grab attention ah factions
you definetly a dick so, we'll call you flaccid
now as for the pipe that you smokin and tokin your crack
Listen carefully.
Wow... This is a championship battle right here. After listening to it 10 times, I have came up with a winner.
Byron