Ahhh, the obligatory PX9 remix
OK - the 8 for originality is actually pretty high - usually anything that's a remix will get a lower score in that area from me but I added a few back on because this is actually a very different and quite original interpretation of the song.
Diversity only lost a point - not sure why - it just felt right.
Quite clear enough for the portal.
Effort - lost a single point and only because I think you could have pushed this just a hair parther - the slower tempo in the beginning almost made me expect a huge tempo change - yes that may be trite but still, I think it could have been very cool - go from half to original tempo to double... no worries because:
Overall I'm scoring it 9 and 5
I'm sure that if you spread word around a bit this would be picked up for a submission.