Hmm...
Okay. Let me explain the 4....
It was a great idea. A really great idea. Rhymes even worked pretty well.
The fact that you wrote all of that really just shows how awesome you are.
But... the fact that you had *one* female voice singing... one very light, quiet, almlost whisperingly feminine voice singing... just ruined the entire thing. A large group of people or something would have made it a HUNDRED TIMES better. Woulda been a 10/10, voted 5/5. But because this one female voice was so quiet and shy sounding it just dropped the entire thing flat on its face.
Re-record it with a larger group of people, and I can tell you now it would be a huuugee success.
Other than that- really good idea!
-Kaiyae