Improve
Your animation is really good so if you put this character in a game or flash it would be really good
Reviews for "Paladin Girl"
Not bad
You have talent, just try to do something with content next time!
hnmmm
very well drawn, and the one second or so of animation and sound is good, but this seems like it should be part of something bigger rather than a stand alone piece.
Pointless
Really good anime though.
Too simple...
I think this is way too simple to just stand alone.
Maybe develop it further?
Like the art style and smooth animation though