Effective
I certainly wouldn't smoke if it meant I would be killed by a ninja.
The animation was... decent.
But it needs sound.
So 5/10.
Effective
I certainly wouldn't smoke if it meant I would be killed by a ninja.
The animation was... decent.
But it needs sound.
So 5/10.
It was okay....
This movie wasn't too great. Sure, it was a cool idea, 'Don't smoke or ninjas will pwn you." But it just didn't really tie the whole thing together. All there is a ninja killing some smoking guy. You don't even really know if it's because he was smoking. Try and make the movie more relevant to the point please.
Thanks for the feedback. This isn't really supposed to be some ground-breaking project or anything. I'll most likely add sound very soon, but I doubt I'll change anything else. Thanks for taking the time to review. Maybe I'll have some more projects up soon.
intersting.
I think you should add sound; which you in fact said so yourself....
I think you could add more to it and it would be funny.
simple . yet still vaguely funny
dont smoke . . or a ninja will sneak up behind you and chop your head off . . . . lol