meh. . .
don't worry about the guy below me (that1andonly). he's a dick.
but i'd have to agree with him (in a much nicer fashion). the music over power's the animation. it feels too slow to be an action bit, but i can see the hard work you put into it, so that defiantly counts for a lot. maybe try experimenting with more interesting camera angles and down play the music. . . a lot. especially that Stained bull street or whatever was playing. i didn't get to the end to find out the artist.
one other thing, i feel like we need a good reason to sympathize with your protagonist. i can't really relate to facing my brother on the field of combat with every intention of killing him, unless it's for the remote. then it's on like donkey kong.
a valiant effort.
p.s: the other guy below me (thisisunreadable) needs a thesaurus.