LAG!
Look, um, i dont know, but i had low quality and yet it lagged pretty hard.
There was either yet to much filters or i dont know.
The drawings werent really good tbh, they could ev used more '' touching '' .
Animation, well, tweens (of course, but FBF works better on Madness) it looked kind of yet too '' beginner '' stage. How long have you been working with Flash?
The plot of the story, well, it was kind of confusing, because it didnt sync,
like, on one moment its there, and the next over there.
And i couldnt see anything cause it LAGGED so hard...
Improve following:
- Do not use objects with HEAVY FILTERING and DO NOT TWEEN a filtered object.
- Draw everything, light effects, shadows, details, particless, etc.
- Do not use too much tweens. Too much = LAG.
I cant give you a 10 because it does need improvement, and the movie lagged very much, which really is a shame.
So i'll give you a 6, and then, Try again.
I wish you good luck on future projects,
And heres some tip you can use:
1) Make up a good story, if Madness, use the old school; guy - kill guard - kill many - kill clown - end. Okay? Or make up your own.
2) Be aware of how you export the file, rewatch and redo it.
Too much lag = Bad. Filters = lag = bad. Result: Bad movie.
3) FBF (when its Madness) Concentrate on your animation.
Its the head point of Flash. Dont Tween. FBF (In my opinion)