It was fun
I really liked it
Short, funny, and original
you could improve a bit more on timing, sometimes
and there was a part that was badly recorded because you could hear the buzz from outside
Other than that it was really good
Reviews for "The Importance of Blocks"
Mariofan9 responds:
Thank you very much. Your review was useful.
Not Great (because you're a novice)
The 3D animation and "complex" tweens were decent. As for a flash I dropped your score to a 5. The non-3D aspects of the flash didn't look like they were a finished product and if they were I don't mean to insult.
If they weren't though I don't think you should submit anything that is 1/2 done. It doesn't really benefit anyone especially yourself. For pre-submission reviews ask friends and family. They'll usually be the 2nd most honest people.
Keep practicing and submit something you'd consider a finished product.
Mariofan9 responds:
Thank you.
I really tried to present it well, so yeah ... I don't upload unfinished projects here since that is frowned upon. It was supposed to be a finished project.
Allow me to review your review. It's a good review, but you need to be clear before you knock off 50 % of the score; all you can state is that the non-3d parts don't look like a finished product, without any reason. I feel like I'm being treated slightly unfairly because of this.
It's not that bad.
I thought that the flash was actually quite good! I have never used 'Flash', but numerous people have told me that it isn't easy. The information is convincing, and the 3D scenes are incredible. The only problem for me, was the intro, with the wierd spinny block thing, if you could change that, it would be perfect, but until then, 4/5 and 8/10.
Mariofan9 responds:
Thank you very much for your friendly and useful review. The weird spinny block thing was my way of showing "look, I can do lots of complex motion tweens".
I appreciate your review very much!
Not at all bad
Try not to be too hard on yourself about flash skills, there are a ton of other videos that have no skill at all. Solid work.
Mariofan9 responds:
Thank you very much for your friendly comment! :)
Not very interesting
You don't need to be good at Flash to come up with a good premise. I suppose its good for one of your first flashes, but it was just plain confusing.
Mariofan9 responds:
You could've stated more positive/negative points for the low score you gave me. I used 3D-animation, and loads of tweens. I put hours and hours and hours of effort in this.