seemed like a true blue nightmare to me
i would have pissed my pants and begged for death in that situation. lol. good work. on peice of critique though: work on you main character, he seemed TOO childish and simple (was the point i know, but it would help if he had a little more emotion).
Very Good
The creatures were very creative in my opinion.
It reminded me a lot of Dead Space. Your not scared in the fact that you might die, in fact your almost welcoming it, but the noises... the noises are what get at you after a while.
The breathing was especially done very well.
The only thing that I would improve upon was the time. I felt like I needed more, so that is the reason you get a 9.
Others felt it dragged on waaay too long....but I could have definitely kept adding creatures to it!
more funny than scary
the creatures were so out there that it was more funny and then the buy sucking his thumb.
Some people are more weirded out by monsters that look a little dopey and cartoony, not sure why...it works on me too though! :D
Whats not to like
It has the almost same name as mine.
Now.. see if that happened to me
if that happened to me id punch myself in the face until i died.