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Well pretty good first flash. There is alot of fbf first flashes, but that can't be helped. Nice mellow song and the graphics prove to mimic this. I was very angry when I watched this and it made me calm and happy and I enjoyed. Then I wrote this review and remembered I was originally mad and became mad again. O well, that can't be helped either. Good job.
Not bad for a first try
If you are going to use lines as your subject matter especially if they are invoking the mood of the music, you really have to be spot on with timing and beats. The bottom line that is trying to go with the beat or flow of the music seems too rough. Smooth it out and make it more rhythmic with the flow of the music. The parts that spawn off of it are done pretty well. Keep it up.