impressive intro
nice dude, you truly made a good come-back, this was a good movie. my first zelda game was this version. hopeing soon for the second part:)
Reviews for "LOZ: The Sacred World p1"
needs some improvements
Way better than the old one , but too short...
Keep it up !!
Nice one, but why the Goron didn´t talked when...
the Guards did after Link ended talking? (You understand, right?) I don´t really know what the old part haved of bad, im watching it now :)
it was good
i thought it was pretty good but it just felt a little empty you didn't really explain some things the best and it was a little random at parts but overall a nice film.
pretty good, minor flaws
Here are some suggestions to make your flash better with just a little work:
1. On the text bars (when the characters speak) add a portrait (that is their head) to the side of the bar to let the reader know whos talking, to me it just makes it look more clean, but i did like your idea of color coding the text, you can still do that
2. Tighten up the dialogue a bit, sometimes you got too wordy
3. I know this is a story that is probably supposed to be more mystery than action, but a little wouldnt hurt
4. Liked the music
5. Add a better loading screen or a menu, email me on newgrounds if u need info on how to do it.
Anyway, nice entry hope to see more soon!
Hiyoko responds:
Thanks for the critism, I'll work on this the next part. And a better loading screen, I would love to get some tips for that. Add me on MSN: hiyoko_9000@hotmail.com