oh...
i see he must of stopped it for to be continued. and forgot to put it on there.
Reviews for "SW EP 1 (unfinished)"
way
way crem?
Has Potential
From what I've seen it looks like this could be an alright flash.
Tips
Okay, your first problem is that you say "please don't say that I should have finished the video, because I won't do that." WRONG, the best thing you can do is follow through, otherwise you are teaching yourself to give up on your flash before you complete it, and that is a slippery slope that you will definitely slide down. The best thing you can do for yourself is just buckle down and grind through the whole thing -- learn some self discipline or don't expect to get anything good done.
Second tip: stray away from sprites. Yeah, it still counts as animation, blah blah, but what happens when you get to the point where you want to do something on your own? What if you come up with a completely amazing and original story? you are going to need the drawing skill necessary to go through with your future tasks, so you need to start drawing NOW, even if you aren't that good, it doesn't matter because practice is practice; accept where you are, and work to your best with what you've got. which leads to tipe #3: think for yourself.
Come up with your own original ideas, even if they are stupid. Maybe animate a funny situation that happened when you were hanging out with your friends, or at school -- just find a way to relate it to a broad audience and avoid jokes that are way to inside.
Most of all, just keep working, don't start slacking. If you keep working, even if you churn out a bunch of shit, eventually you will produce gold. Stand on your own two feet, and don't rely on what other people tell you to do. Don't even listen to me if what I'm saying doesn't make rational sense to you. Do what you know to be right.
Good luck in the future.
Shadic15 responds:
Well... thank you for those tips. I'm gonna do my best...
it not bad
I don't mind watching it it pretty good but it look really familiar