Needs Inprovement
Grammar needs checking, sprites need to be smaller, and story needs a little changing.
Reviews for "DBZ vs MK episode 1"
GuilderK responds:
ok...im check this and te next episode will be better
that sukd :<
plz try harder good idea :> bad everything else :<
Akward...
The movie was short, but I guess you tried. Try a little harder, and fix the spelling errors.
Finish they...
Spell check and proof reading, seriously. This seriously needs tons of work.
GuilderK responds:
im beginer in this but i accept sugestions
We're laughing at you, not with you.
Grammar: This made me want to eat a puppy. The errors made the entire story seem like one big joke, with everyone in it played by retards.
Animation/Sprites: Fail. I've tried my hand at sprite work before, it may have been bad, but this was very horrible. It was like trying to drive with a windshield covered in mud. Clean it up.
Story: Just....no. Get to know the characters better, and avoid the blatant references from anime.
"Copy Technique" is fail.
MK using fusion is Fail -1 on a D6.
Overall: Fail
GuilderK responds:
im brazilian...i dont speak very well