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Reviews for "My first game"

Very basic

I.. uhm. Well its okay for starters. You need some big improvment! The game used very basic actionscript. It seems like something very basic in flash 5. My mouse went halfway though the black. You need to config it. I hope to see alot of improvemt

pretty nice

A really nice game for starters
Nothing out of the ordinary but still nice
The levels were nice since they graduatly got harder and harder
Buy you should make an anti cheat system
When a player right clicks the mouse he should restart the level so he can't cheat
Also instead of using the default pointer you could draw a dot or something like that since it's easier for the player to use a circle
Next time try improving the graphics.
It can't hurt spending some time on making your game
I can't wait to see your second game
If you make it don't hesitate to Pm me the link to it

Stallker responds:

how to make that anti cheta sistem, shoul i add listener? on click? or is any function what respons on right click?

i useing AS3

p.s. and sory for my bad english :)

its alright

seeing this is youre first game im giving you 7 its ok

a few pointers

lyk u said, there are a few bugs. First off, the old right-click cheat works here. And in the end screen, you spelled playing wrong, and u used improper grammar.
'Want to play this crap again?', not 'Want to play again this crap?' so yeah, work on that.

Stallker responds:

if you did not notised i am not english :) so thats why there is some spell mistakes

Not bad

not bad for your first, just a little criticism: in some levels you can just move out of the pop up window and enter back on the finish without having to complete the course, you should work on that if you were to make another one of these.