This is terrible.
Although, you remind me of myself when I was in 3rd grade. Your animation is terrible, and it actually reminds me of when I take a SHIT in the morning. Now mind you, if I could put shit on a plate and move it in one direction in a consecutive order, and then put words next to it spelled out in alphabet soup, then I might have something that looks kind of like your flash. Your attempt at a flash was a very good one. No, I'm kidding. Actually you should practice more on your art work instead of practicing on your fucking poem writing.