Art style is great, but storytelling needs work
Pros:
- The drawing and animation was very well-done.
- Funny style of humor.
- Sound/music was clear and well-done.
Cons:
- Storytelling seemed to be going in many directions, lacking a clear path, just a bunch of unrelated events, perhaps the idea was to provide some distraction while the punchline is delivered, but something seems to be missing in the execution of it, not sure exactly what... just got the feeling the story was an afterthought or a make-it-as-you-go affair in a few places.
Overall:
The piece has what it takes in terms of quality of visuals and audio to deserve a high rating, but the storytelling is an area of weakness that could use some practice imho.