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Reviews for "Inspiration"

Creepy

That is sick. I suppose the guy is talking to a dead guy though, so he can't be all there.

Needs improvement.

Good story line, but not so good animation. If you improve in that area, then you could have a great flash.

Senselessly weird, random, and morbid.

You should probably look into some paxil, or maybe just take some tylenol pm next time you're up at 2 in the morning.

That said, I liked your musical score -- very atmospheric. The sound effects were well chosen, but poorly executed -- the timing is off. The animation itself was okay, though it was a little strange that your main character was paper-thin. It's one thing to animate that way and make use of the style's novelty, it's another entirely when the effect looks like corner-cutting in the animation, which I suspect it was.

It was creepy as I said above, and succeeded somewhat in that respect... but was more weird than anything. I don't feel moved or compelled to thought by your animation, and I didn't particularly enjoy watching it. And I'm a freak, by the way. I generally like creepy/weird stuff. Maybe if it had been darkly humorous; or creepy in a way that translated well into flash (gore in a paper-thin world really doesn't insofar as being creepy goes) -- like something more intellectual or psychological -- I'd have enjoyed watching it more.

Decent idea, but I'm more creeped out by my own pereceptions of the author than by the animation itself.

Not into it, sorry...

Look, I'm sure you spent a lot of time working on this, and the ideas are sophisticated at some level, but I'm just not too impressed. Would have preferred it, if at all, as a book/short story. Also consider that repetitive music can make for increased rates of negative attention spans...

I hope you'll find my review rating relatively fair.

some insight

You'd be better off inspiring some sleep upon yourself. I'll pass on a 1 for the effort of animation and the style. Though your flash sadly appeals none at all to me.