Interesting...
I liked when Sonic beat up Tails, and really digged that Desert Dweller's voice, so points for that! but, Ijust don't like the story much. Don't take it wrong. That's just my opinion.And *ahem* where was Knuckles? No Knuckles, no 10. nice cliffhanger though.
Knuckles WILL be in the next story. I'm introducing one major Hero per story and he will be Full Knuckles at his basest going back to his roots.
As forr the story itself Give it a chance to get going mine do i tend to build the characters first before we throw any sort of a real plot into it
Origin story with promise, acting lacks heart.
Even with sprite animation, if you decide to add actors, they have to be up to snuff. Just listening to actors read their lines without any real enthusiasm makes even a great animation flop. Aside from Viremaster, I felt the others (even Rina-chan unfortunately) were dragging their feet. (or voices in this case). Here I hope to see improvement.
As for the story so far, it shows promise, an origin story to Sonic. So you've got your path to follow, let's just see where you take it.
music
you need better music and play it thru it especially talking its really plain and when you watch any animated show you really think you don't here music in the background through the whole thing just a heads up plus your voices have a echo like in a room or something if you had music playing you wouldn't really here that echo
n you done this for a while now thought you would fixed or had noticed it by now
Intersting!
I wonder ifthe brotherhood members are like us, the Nobodies!
story was ok...
...but the voice overs were really bad i couldnt even watch all of due to the voicing of the characters
Specifics dude i can't improve if you don't give specifics. Who and when???