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I know you apologized for the bad English, but I'm gonna mention it anyways. Yeah, the English was horrible. I can tell that you put a good effort into this, but I think that you would be better getting a microphone, speaking your native language, and finding a good translator to do some subs for you. You know what, you probably won't even understand any of this. Good work on the art, too bad it didn't make any sense.