Concept is there.
Just work on your delivery and timing. The random anime references hit home for me, but it wasn't entertaining at all. Keep at it.
Reviews for "T. TotallyBS, Team Fort.."
It feels like an inside joke-
-And I'm on the outside.
First off, I'd like to compliment the voice work, which is better than most, and the animation is well done.
But the core of the animation would be the jokes, and I just don't get them. Maybe the comedy is better if you're a member of the RIT anime club, but I just felt lost when the credits rolled. If you do make another installment of this series- or any future work, i suppose, you may want to consider how it might be viewed from a stranger's perspective.
omegafinal responds:
Yeah, it is better understood if you're an RIT student. But the other jokes there should still be accessible to the outside, such who the hell would go outside dressed like that?! If anything, this is the most "inside" I'll get before things will get lost.
All the scenes with Team Fortress should be relatively accessible to the outside. At worse, they are only known to the players of said game.
Totally BS indeed
Nice effort, but if you start an animation with main TF2 themes you should stay on topic. It got boring really fast.
.wefs
Hehe, almost as bad as real anime.
Uh...
Voice acting is good, but it just wasn't funny to me. It was too quiet and bland to have any real quality, and it seemed like just another parody video using jokes from an indie website.
Bottom Line:
If you added more action and less spaces in between dialog, it would be a bit more interesting and would get more positive feedback.
omegafinal responds:
This flash is directed towards two different audiences, the fans of the MMO-FPS "Team Fortress 2", and the members of the RIT Anime Club. Since this was created specifically for the club, I had to keep it short and simple; and uploaded it here for those that missed it.
Like all parodies, you must have knowledge of what is being made fun of in order to get it.