nice ad.
good quality, length,and compelling.
Reviews for "OLA Contest Entry"
smirkstudios responds:
thanks, dude! you seem to get what i was doing, and thanks for the 9!!!
cool commercial
good luck with that contest!
smirkstudios responds:
thanks, i might need it!!! thanks for the 9!!!
good
just make the graphics better
smirkstudios responds:
ya, i whipped this up in about 6 hours, so i didnt really put much into it like i usually would. thanks for the review!
Funkoff
Advertisement? WTFFFFFFFF?
Isn't there a whistle for something like that?
The flash is almost well made (the drawings not). But I don't want to see ADVERTISEMENTS! We made flashentertainment.
smirkstudios responds:
i read the rules thoroughly and the only thing that was against this was "it cannot simpley be an ad for your site." seeing as how this is an ad for ANOTHER site, and is really more of a CONTEST ENTRY, i meet the criteria for submission. also, it is supposed to be mildly funny with more warm hearted feel to it. since this is an actual toon with a story and things, it is ok. plus, ryan khatam (vastcool) did a commercial for a zoombar and he has a 4.30 on his!!! he is also much better and more experienced, but still, if he can do it, i can do it. thanks for the review!!!
hehe:)
great