needs some work
the naruto fight scenes need work rasengan is more than just a blue ball it spirals and needs to be more fast paced to keep up with the dbz,the dbz are all good though i feel it paused occasionally, the story needs some more fleshing out but simple and has potential but the way the characters reacted weren't like their anime counter parts(i don't think everyone would be so ready to fight that easily) but i guess its your film so u could do whatever you want.
Yea, I'm not so good on the story thing, which makes me throw the character's actual actions off. I think I'm just gonna scrap this and try something new though. Thx for the review =)
its ok
The animation is good.
The story line needs some work. I can help you with the plot if you need it. Might want to reconsider DBZ vs. Naruto. Its a good idea and i like just need to go about it differently.
I agree completly, but i'm really tired of doing flashes that have to contain to a story. Thx for the offer to help, but I don't think i'll need it.
that good
but you a little more work into it but it so far
for effort
I voted it 3 for effort, it was a good try.
It's not that it's bad, your storyline needs work. That and Naruto vs. DBZ doesn't work out too well when they are put together.
I'm not really good at stories, and since this is a reasonable review I'm considering it and thinking about canceling this and doing something else.