It was alright.
From a story aspect it was a rather nice short, It had a plot, a plot that made sense and a plot that was easy to understand and grasp. So that's perfect.
From a technical aspect the flash was done fairly well, the jittery animation made up for a good atmosphere. The only thing I would of liked to see was a little more detail in the background,ground.
From a sound aspect you had great use of sound effects and a very good/unique choice in music, it complimented the flash very well. However a few of the effects sounded out of place, and a little more variety would of added a little more charm.
Over all it's a great flash, but with every flash there is always room for improvement. Good work.