played out
this could have been good but you needed more original material.
Reviews for "Laser collection"
BRAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was TERRIBLE! Maby a backstory would help.
My Review?
Im only going to give this a low score before there was recently a Laser Collab Submitted and when you compare this to that, its not so good sorry, Maybe you could try release a flash that hasnt been around for while something new, as when you add a flash similar to another you begin to get people like me (sorry) who compare to the other version and creates a competition, Hey, it may just be a thing I do but its how i work sorry, So Nothing TOO new to me and too much Dr. Octagonapus (lol), i think if you are going to do something like this you need to search around the site you are on, in this case Newgrounds for similar flashes and find out what people have said about there ones and maybe try put them in yours to create a better flash than theres, etc, this will give you an idea of what people want, whats out there and who you have to beat XD, So for YOUR flash in particular, i think you need to work on the graphics, Refine the images ( Like Rounding off objects and such) Work on a bit more sound effects, as ItsyBitsy said below me, it does sound like you recorded it off youtube, try find a clearer clip of it, Maybe also add some peaceful background music, I find by doing this it makes it more random cause its all peaceful and such and this random Shoop Da Whoop Comes and and BLAAAAHHH! lol, Like Disturbing the peace, Ummmm, Abit more length obviously XD So yea, i think thats about it from me.
Good Luck on your next flash!
horrible
this is horrible it looks like a child drew it and the doc oc thing was played way to many times
Alexman159 responds:
Yep that pretty much sums it up, the only reason i submitted was because i realized your Batting average was the average of your best 3 and not all of them
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Where's the depth? Wheres the character development?!?! WHERE'S THE SWASH BUCKLING PIRATES?!?!?!??! FAIL!
Alexman159 responds:
Ahhhhh pirates... i knew i forgot something.