...Strangely touching.
Alright, I hate to take away the one point, but really it needs improvement with some of the design and animation and such... But really, really nice flash. It made me tear up a hell of a lot; I felt so sad for the grandfather... You know, I should stop or I'll make myself cry properly, but that's the one thing I fear the most about getting old - losing a life partner, and you represented that so well.
I think you should definitely look at continuing flash.