Brilliant
Well, I'm honestly quite surprised to say I like it. I have never seen the point of experimental flash, and have often found it, as well as disturbing, without any gain or meaning. More, "I'll create for the sake of creating," instead of for the sake of commenting. I felt your flash portrayed the great contrast between the ideal and the reality. You have made me re-consider my views on experimental flash, maybe there is still life left in it.