EXCELLENT!!
i loved it!! keep it up!!
just needs some improvements
since you're already creating episode 3, maybe you could work on the improvements? i might message you :). Anyways, i loved it and i know you have potential. with some touching up, this could be a memorable newgrounds series!
one more thing i thought about. this series needs a title xD.
can't wait for part 3 .. but if u make changes.. i can manage :)