Very nicely done.
I must say that It was very creative. I enjoyed all of the ideas and fetishes. Very good sense of humor. I felt the art was somewhat choppy, or etchy. If that's not a specific style you're looking for I'd go over your lines on the art and touch them up some. Other than the line art, can't really complain, I loved every minute of it. I think the funniest part was the wounds singing with the vagina. Nice work!