awesome
it needz adjustments i look foward 2 them n da next issue
Reviews for "Wave Warrior EXE 2:Dark"
I didn't think I'd do this, but...
This has improved greatly from the first; I am glad to have played this as this wasn't so bland and boring from the prequel. (Does it matter if we played the Light or the Dark one first?)
Great job on crisping out your animation, as well as the dialogue box/status bars and stuff...Now, let me make you a couple suggestions:
1. When you see the status bars, you should also put like a number ratio (current/total), so that you may know how much health you got exactly, to not only further clean-cut the animation/gameplay, but also to help the player make a better decision on moves.
2. The grammar in most of the speeches aren't the shiniest of the golden bars; what I am saying here is you should do one of two things: 1. Go in and edit the grammar/spelling/punctuation of what you typed before you finalize it so that way you can further have the storyline make more sense, people be able to understand what they say, and so your flash gets more recognition. 2. Or better yet, you can get someone who can help edit the grammar/spelling/punctuation for you. You can just send them a PM on here if the editor is someone from NG, or you can get a RL friend or something to proof-read the sentences and make sure they are correct and don't sound like something a 7 year-old would say.
As I've said, you've improved much from the first submission of this series. As a reward for that, I, as well as many other people, will give you a better rating and recommendation for a collection. So here's my ruling:
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9/10
4/5
Recommended for Sonic collection
Favorited
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Great job; still some kinks in there, but when you fix them, you'll be getting non-stop 10's, 5's, recommendations, and favorites. Keep the progression, and your flashes will be as great as that of Alvin Earthworm, LGDVegito (sp?), and ChamberACR, for example.
(P.S. If you can't find anyone who will help proof-read the sentences and stuff, I will gladly fix up the errors in the dialogue.)
mmm
wayyyyyyyyy better than the first, still could use a lot of grammatical work though
GIENIUS!
You are the firt one to pare-up Tikal and Shadow. Let me tell you that it was genius!
Amazing
This is great! I can't wait for part 3!