Good Animation, bad dialoug
I liked the whole subtitle thing it totally worked, but it could use better dialoug. The animations were great especially the the freakish smoking boy. All in all considering its halloween season I was genourous with my rating.
Meh
The joke was lame, and the animation wasnt exactly winner. Hard to say if this one will survive for long, but hey its newgrounds, its hard to get your stuff submitted here. Still, good luck.
Estoestá de la verga.
Muy, muy buena animación. El diálogo fue cómico y veloz. Te quedó (o les quedó) muy, muy bien. Los felicito y espero que traigan más. Lo de la cebolla estuvo original.