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Reviews for ".Alice."

Great Job

Great job it was a little scary..i didnt think the animation was to bad it could be better but theres always room for improvment. You can diffently do better i can tell but overall i enjoyed. It kept me interested i would like to see more from you because you deffintly have talent.

Just wasn't scary

it simply wasn't scary.

M1K3-B responds:

Sorry to disappoint then. But do I only get a 2 because it just wasn't scary? or did you just not like it in general.

critique

some areas of the images/graphics could have been used a little blurring eg the line in the road HOWEVER good work man

M1K3-B responds:

I would love the blurring feature. But sadly I only have MX so I have to do without. Thank you though.

Woah!

That was very creepy, abliet the art needed some work but wow, I have surround sound on my pc and I heard things behind me, creeped me out. Crazy!

M1K3-B responds:

Yeah my PC has nice speakers with huge bass. So it really adds to a flash.

Alright.

I really, really hate to lower your score on this animation but in all honety, it just didn't cut it , sorry. I loved the still frameness of her first victim, with the lights flashing, but it seemed to me that you were just covering up animating something, but i guess it worked so congrats. I really, and i do apologize for this, couldn't help myself at a bit of a laugh when she "talked" if you can call it that, to the first dude. I mean the mouth kinda was random and a bit funny. The rest of the movie was WAY to vague to be scary, so put more action in it, even if it is just a dead body or a running cycle.
So this is what i thought, and again i do apologize for lowering the score because i really wanted to grade it higher.

M1K3-B responds:

No need to apologize for anything. Understandably, when a animator puts something out for others to view. They're not always going to view it the same way, or how the author intended it. I'm just glad you told me why you gave it a lower score, and told me what you thought was silly or could be improved. So thank you.