animation
you need better animation. and try to find music without that much swearing.
animation
you need better animation. and try to find music without that much swearing.
Lolz kk
Decent flash.
not bad I like the sound, good plot.
Vote 5 next time whateva u like! XD
Not very good -_-
I'm giving you a 4/10 1/5 since you had a bit of story in there. But heres the criticism.
You made simple typos such as, "Did you found . . ." you should have put, "Did you find . . ."
The part where he said, "I'm demoting you to dead." was very lame.
The song hardly went a long with the flash.
Anyways, take more time with your flash, and I'm sure you'll do better. ^-^
weknfewkln
work on the animation and the length of it