Okay..
I like the fact that you spent some time on the background and the characters. The music was pretty decent as well. The whole idea was just kind of dumb, but it was carried out okay. You could probably do a decent feature length flash on the idea, but a short one just feels like you had no intentions of making anything long.
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~~REVIEW~~
Ok im not sure what to think of this one, first off it was way short, it gave me a sorta smile but seill didnt make much sense, i do like that use made a character and added backrounds, but still lacked in more effort...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make iit longer give it some sorta story and some meaning, you have it ok with art and color just needs more effort...
~~OVERALL~~
A very small flash with very little effort but shows some ok points...
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Eh?
A guy somkes a cigarette and gets shot THE END. What was the point in even bothering to submit this let alone making it, there was no entertainment within this movie at all.
Cigarettes don't go out in one puff.....
.... bullets don't travel that slow, and why is this guy's eye bulging out of his face? If this is a second edition I'm glad I didn't see the first. I tryed to make a flash and it looked pretty close to this so let me give you a word of advice: get aquanted with FLASH before you submit stuff like this. It wastes all of our time. I have faith in you!
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Ok.. a guy smokes and gets shot in the back of the head... what the hell was that? That wasn't a movie, that was just simply horrible.