good start
but it still needs some work. I think since you put the voice of the duke in there, you shoulda had it pan over and show that it was, in fact, the duke back from the dead come to kick the yahoo guy's ass. I know it doesn't make sense, but it woulda been hella funny to pan over and see the duke, and then he winks at the camera and tips his hat. umm... I have a really stupid sense of humor. well *I* woulda liked it....