Reviews for The Three Commandments

[Coop]

Nice message

I have to say, I totally agree with the thoughts on how musical quality has declined since the 80s, but I would have to point out that it came downhill from the 70s to the 80s, before rising toward the end of the decade and remaining around that level for the 90s, before plummeting again. It will go through a resurgence, I am sure.

A nice animation, that could do with a little more in the drawing department, but you're learning, so it is getting there. With a few more minutes spent drawing, you will make the whole piece look a whole lot better - try zooming in and using a smaller brush size to draw your creations with, as it would look less messy.

I'd also recommend that you get a tablet, as this would help mightily.

Good work, keep working on it, you've got the ability to go far, don't waste it.

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LenardNotLenny responds:

I was trying to go for a simpler style, so that might account for the large brush size, but i prolly should re-do some of the drawings...

And tablets cost money, which I have none.

[Haggard]

\m/

I like the message of this flash. A very important message, I think. Even though I don't agree that the musical standard started declining in '00. Just take a look at what kind of music was at the top of the charts in the '80s and '90s. ;)
However, there have always been and hopefully always will be people who make music that is worthwhile listening to and that offers a high level of musical talent.

Anyway, back to the flash. While the message was great the graphical presentation lacked some quality. Most of the images where drawn pretty sloppy, but I think with a bit more practice and work you should be able to create very decent graphics.

The robot voice wasn't the best choice, but at least you managed to create a quite easy to understand voice. But I still think it would be better if you add subtitles to the flash.

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LenardNotLenny responds:

Subtitles! That's exactly what I need... thanks a lot for you're review!

[Fro]

Not bad.

Comments before actual review - How was your grade?

Animation/Graphics - Kind of simple. These could of really been worked on and it would of really helped your score of the flash, even though it seems like your flash passed with a pretty good score anyway. Just kind of sloppy for the most part, but with a little work that could improve.

Story/Content - Hm, some good stuff in here. I was personally kind of bored with it, but I think that had something to do with the audio.. Nothing much more to talk about here.

Audio - The voice... was just bot like. It sounded like a robot at least. Is that what you used? If so I think you should do voice acting for your flash animation next time and if that was your voice than you do need to put a little bit more emotion in to it.

Overall - Has potential, but the voice just goes on and on like an actual lecture from a teacher that would make someone bored.

C52

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LenardNotLenny responds:

I got a perfect score.

I was hoping for more constructive criticism from the RRC... I personally like the robot-esque voice and the simple graphics, but I'd agree that it doesn't really exercise a whole lot of skill.

[KromeHeart]

has potential

sorry but you need to stop it from looping and work on the animation but the art and sound was great

LenardNotLenny responds:

lol

[stuff-doesnt-work]

Good Work

The simplistic animations work well as does Microsoft Sam. Good message.

LenardNotLenny responds:

i have no idea what that means.