The storyline could of been more epic
Both animations were very short.I was hoping for more adventure when viewing this ;(
The narrator's voice could of had reverb or some kind of sound effect to it to make the story sound more dreamlike.This would fit so nice as a long story book or animation.
aww so short :(
i liked part 1 because i thought that this was going to be an ongoing thing. however, the plot that u had in mind did match with the overall length of the series so u still did a great job. but in this final part the sound sync was even more off, but that shows me even more how hard it must be to do that, so to porter nice work anyway!
Encore
go for some uncalled stories to keep up the series like with all peace there was no fear no love no war and they replace the roses to restore sanity, just a thought i wanted to put out there