Good movie!
Hi!!!!!!! It's a good movie, nice drawnings and stuff. But............. there should be more movement. Keep it up!
Reviews for "Dragonball R Episode 1"
Very Nicely Put Together Movie I loved it!
Make Alot of these I like this Series but one thing what version Of Vegeta is that?
okay?
i thought goku can surpass ssj2 after vegeta dose ssj4 dosent he go ssj3/4 any way ....
Great
That was pretty sweet cooljerk, keep em coming.
Promising DBZ work!
Certainly not bad for a first try! Graphics are actually not too bad, and the Japanese sounds are much appreciated. I happen to love that Don't You See song! Good choice of Japanese-ish camera angles too, and it's nice and long!
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I'd say your biggest work, aside from improving your animation as you continue your work (it's kinda annoying now), is working on a more compelling story. Vegeta going evil and killing everyone is really nothing new. Also, it's a bit confusing as it is... why is Vegeta a wierd modified SSJ4, and why is Goku only like SSJ2 when he fights him? And do you plan to explain all the wierdness in the rain? Also, your ending scrolls back into your beginning, which is kinda annoying.
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Well, enough ranting. I really like the idea of a continued DB/Z/GT fanfic in Flash, and I'd love to see how your work improves!
Cooljerk01 responds:
hehe, thanx. Those questions were actually what I was hoping for. Don't worry, I wrote the whole story before I started on the first episode (hell, the fan manga is complete), so everything is explained. Don't worry, it'll begin to make sense in a couple of episodes.