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Reviews for "In my mind"

That was dope

I really like what you did in this flash it was very well animated plus the story was pretty deep all throughout the movie. Nice job making it just hope you get a daily award for this.

Lochie responds:

Thank you, you are very kind. :) :)

Amazing

A really experimental concept but i loved it, the music made it a bit dark and mysterious too and the text at the end supported this. I love the way the music synced so nicely with what was happeneing like a psychadelic music video.
You're obviously very talented so I'm gonna keep watching your work I like your quick but clean animation style. Nice menu too.

9/10
Marsupial
Review Request Club

Lochie responds:

Thank you very much for the 9, thank you for reviewing, and thank you VERY much for the great review.

:D

Nice !

Very good effort man, I really enjoyed it. It kept me viewing until the end what means that it was catchy and well done :P.

A good job you did with the graphics, some parts were very nice. Though the drawing quality changes during the flash, I think it was expected and actually it's not bad at all. Through these changes we can clearly notice the differents dreams, so good job. The colors were nice. I liked, when at the begining, it switchs from black and white to colorful, it surprised me in the good way ; ).

The animation was smooth during most of the flash, but sometimes I got less soft and smooth but once again it's not a real problem. And the animation owes its awesomeness to the synchronization with the music. You did a great job with it, in my opinion it's the best part side of the flash.

I can really comment the story because a Dream isn't expected to follow any rules, this flash just shows the large kindom of the Dream, you really catched this feeling, I was like in a dream ....

The music was well chosen and fited in nicely with the animation, as I said above, great job. Nothing esle to say =D.

Overall, very good production that seems clean and well finished. Oh I forgot a detail, really enjoyed the Menu: it was pretty simple and empty but I enjoyed it. This dark screen made me think of the moment when you are almost sleeping but not entierly, so yeah, good thing.

*Review Request Club*

Lochie responds:

Thank you, I was trying to change styles throughout the flash, I just wanted to show my different techniques, I didn't get all of them in though.

SINXING TO MUSIC IS COOL.

It was supposed to be a dream-like experience, I am glad that you realised that. :)

I am glad that you understood pretty much everything that was intended, thank you for the great review.

Nice, but random

Certainly an interesting piece, with some cross-discipline style of animation. The frame by frame was well made, but is certainly not the best part of the piece. I like the scene setting and the way that you drew it.

With the well drawn parts, you need to concentrate on those a bit more, but it's at least something to work towards. I think that it shows your quality as an animator and I would love to see you develop this sort of thing to a full flash or even a series.

[Review Request Club]

Lochie responds:

A series, I never thought of doing that, I might now actually.

I will work towards drawing more detailed pictures from now on, thank you.

awesome

Visuals: well drawn, random, not of the best quality but it doesn't take away from the movie, they went in perfect sync with the music and had that "artistic statement" feel about them

Audio: great song for this type of animation, it went with the whole randomness theme nicely

Overall: cool animation the menu took a bit to start up, might consider changing that, also continue to develop your animation skills, they're good now and can always be better

.:Review Request Club:.

Lochie responds:

Thank you for the encurougement(sp?).

Nice and short review, love it.
I am very pleased that you liked the random aspect of the flash.

Thanks for the review.