Reviews for Wegra Adventure 6

[Haggard]

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Hm, not so random as last time, also not so funny as last time. Only thing that made me chuckle was when wegra asked that lady if she's the one from the last episode.

The music selection was nice for Luigi's home, but didn't fit that good in the "getting a job"-scene.
Also, the music was so loud that we weren't able to hear the speakonia voice that well. All I could make out was "piece of shit".

The last episodes where funny because they where pretty random. In a way the bad drawings fitted to that style. But it doesn't fit here at all, as there is not that much randomness left in this episode. So, improved graphics are mandatory if you plan to continue this series any further.

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[Coop]

Please put more effort in.

Okay, so we've got some music added to the piece, which is nice - plenty of ambient themes out there in the Audio Portal will help you come back with something Musak style for when Wegra goes to the Apple offices.

Still, your drawing style is embarrasing - you really need to get a job, so that you can afford to buy a graphics tablet. If you went that far, you would be able to draw better quality images and the flash that you make would be so much better because of them.

I think that you also need to put some effort into the plotline - it's actually getting there, as you've got the equation sorted: Scenario + Plot Device = Plot. The scenario here being the getting a job, the plot device being the money to get the computer and pencil, while the plot doesn't exactly shine through, but it is at least detectable.

[Review Request Club]

[giftedbuttwisted]

Nice!!

Hey, thanks for usin our song! 5/5 10/10

[kisame]

this was sexy

i wet my dog!

Wegra responds:

Strongbad called. Homsar is Robotnik.

[nukyew2]

Uhh

Did you use a mouse or the laptop touch pad for this? Honestly the lines look aweful. You should probably get a tablet, thats what practically every computer animator uses. A decent one at a good price is the "Bamboo" or the "Bamboo Fun". Also, add voices if you want to attract a bigger audience. That means you also need to get a good mic. You can get a cheap desktop one that has semi-decent sound quality at a low price, or you can get a GOOD one for a little bit more, unfortunetealy the good ones only really sell online and rarely is there a store that would have them. Thats about all you need, good luck!